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A Private In The Spoon Army
« on: 19 Feb 2012 08:31PM »
A Private In The Spoon Army


As a private in the spoon army
(You can call me “Broken and Barmy”)
I help as I am able
(Though my feats aren’t notable)

What citizens should understand
As we fight for our rights in this land
Is that we fight because we must
Even moving one small grain of dust

Adds towards the whole
Lightens the steps towards our goal
And though that one grain drain us
You really shouldn’t blame us

For we do all that we can
Each in our own way
For each one in the van
Dozens cheering on the day

So if one’s ill abed
One more grain too much
Remember steps were lightened
By countless grains of dust

Tony Demoncy
19/02/2012
« Last Edit: 19 Feb 2012 09:18PM by I came i saw i fell over »

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Re: A Private In The Spoon Army
« Reply #1 on: 21 Feb 2012 01:30AM »
 >applause< >applause< >applause<

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Re: A Private In The Spoon Army
« Reply #2 on: 21 Feb 2012 04:17PM »
Lovely poemTony.. loved it.
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Re: A Private In The Spoon Army
« Reply #4 on: 21 Feb 2012 09:03PM »
Brilliant Poem.
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Re: A Private In The Spoon Army
« Reply #6 on: 21 Feb 2012 09:23PM »
Love it, especially,

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For each one in the van
Dozens cheering on the day

It made me stick my chin out and sparked my eyes to the wind.

 >bliss< Go Spoon Army